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Post By：2006-7-2 17:55:00

以下是今天从网上看到一所大学有关专业进修学院网页上之英语，我这水平的人也能发现一些不应犯的文法错误。令人奇怪。

In coherent with this trend, in addition to the existing programmes which cover versatile professional disciplines, in 2006/07 the School will introduce several new Higher Diploma Programmes (HD), including HD in Financial Services…… The programmes we offer equip graduates with the professional skills and academic qualifications which assist them to develop their careers or pursue higher education. Among them is the International MBA programme offered by the Victoria University of Wellington, a top Management School in New Zealand found in 1899.

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Post By：2006-7-3 17:56:00

对不起，有事，迟了回来。

一开始用 In coherent 便错了。“Coherent” 是形容词，是不应与 “in” 连用的。

起句既然用未来式(future tense) the school will…. 但承句却用现代式 (present tense) equip gratuates with the professional skills....... which assist them to develop....。时态并不统一啊！！！承句应该是 will equip gratuates....... which will assist them..... 。

“found” 是 “find 找寻” 的过去式， 也是解”创立“的现代式， 那最后一句.......School in New Zealand found in 1899因为是被动式语法，所以应写为“founded”。